Program Executive
Big Brain Development Centre
Familiar with MOE Pri Maths syllabus. Motivating & Passionate to teach children in small group. Creative mind. Communicate well with staffs, students & parents. Team player. Support operation. Weekdays afternoon & night; sat morning and afternoon. Minimum A level/Fresh graduate may apply. Only open to S'porean/PRs. Email hr.bigbrain.centre@gmail.com
My Application Letter:
13 St George’s Rd
#23-260
Singapore 320013
Contact No. : 94506504
Email Address: seewan@nus.edu.sg
#23-260
Singapore 320013
Contact No. : 94506504
Email Address: seewan@nus.edu.sg
10th February 2011
Dear Sir/Mdm
Application for the position of Program Executive
I am writing to you with great interest in the position of Program Executive in your learning centre. I will be graduating from National University of Singapore with Bachelor of Science (Mathematics) in May 2011, and will be available for employment as soon as June 2011.
During my years of study, I offered tuition to primary school students ranging from Primary 4 to 6, and hence possess adequate familiarity with MOE primary school mathematics syllabus. I am passionate about educating the younger generation, and ensure my students excel in their studies. This can be seen from the improvements of results of my students listed in my resume. The greatest fulfillment I have in tutoring is to see them loving the subject. With the passion I have for children, I also volunteered in my children’s church. Such experiences enable me to handle children in different situations even better.
I am people-oriented and love to communicate with people. Hence, I worked as a receptionist during my holidays, giving me opportunities to interact with different people. I therefore I believe I am the suitable candidate for this position.
I enthusiastically look forward to putting my knowledge and experience into practice in your organisation. Do feel free to contact me and I will be more than willing to answer any question that you may have. Thank you very much for your consideration.
Yours faithfully
Wong See Wan
Enclosure: Resume
Hey See Wan,
ReplyDeleteI can see that your are passionate with education and children!
I think you should write about your creativity and team work quality cause they are listed in the requirements...?
Hello fellow teacher!! :D
ReplyDeleteGlad to see that a teacher is teaching her students to love the subject!
Yes, I agree with Zhi Yan, I think maybe you could include how creative you are with your lessons for children with different learning abilities! Also, I think the subject line should be underlined and centered. Otherwise this looks perfectly fine to me. =)
See you on Friday!
Hi see wan!! Great improvement from the last draft. yEAP.. Agree with Zhiyan that you cetrianly need to persuade your employer that you got the creative mind in the teaching career and why they should pick you instead?
ReplyDeleteI feel that the subject line is fine with having all aligned to one side. As mentioned during class, Miss Fazilah said it was not necessary to underline it. yeap!
Continue to improve on your draft! It's getting better and it sounds professional too!!
Hello!
ReplyDeleteYour application letter is conscise and well planned, but I think you could include a little more elaboration on your skills, like how you inspired your students to love the subject (creative lesson plans, fun learnig experienes etc.).
A little more on how working as a receptionist has improved your communication and interactive skills would also be good.
A few more drafts and you should qualify nicely!
Hey, it is concise and well written.
ReplyDeleteYou could add in some positive feedbacks from students and parents.
Elaborate a little on your unique teaching methods that inspire the kids.
thanks for all your comments. :) but question: is it advisable for it to exceed 1 page? as of now, it's exactly one page, so if i add on the other information, it's going to exceed 1 page. Or should I eliminate some other details?
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